Sunday 9 November 2014

My writing sample!


My Goal Is:Organising Ideas.


Hi every one this is a part of my story What If All The Clocks In The World Went Dead? hope you enjoy

My goal is: Organising Ideas.

What If All The Clocks In The World Went Dead?


“Mum” I said loudly “Is it time to go to school yet” I ask politely
“no” said mum “it’s only am 7.00”
“well its been 7.00 for like a year now” i groan “i am like 13 already” “ i am just gonna go to school now”
I get to school and see aye playing on the monkey bars I yell “Aye its like a stop in time” “Yea I know”aye replies
“my watch says it is 12.00 well 12.01 now well you get what i mean … umm ” i say
“Well that is weird my clock is not working and your watch must be the only one working in like the whole universe” Aye interrupts
I walk to the class “there is no one here” I say
“I know i was counting and i was here for a week good i brought extra food am i right” Aye said “I am gonna go to my secret cubby house (ayes too)” I say
       “What if we make a marshmallow dispenser” aye said
“That is so off topic and where will we get the marshmallows from?” I ask in question.
“We can make a time stopper on your watch and it freezes everyone that is not touching it so we can freeze time and steal stuff from the shops!”aye says with greed. “Umm ok but the time is technically already stopped!” i say with hesitation “lets make it” aye yells with excitement.

     Umm i will go get the tools and the equipment So after we made the time stopper in my watch i told aye to touch the watch then i stopped time everything around us froze it was so freaky (my watch still works) we made the marshmallow machine it shot marshmallows straight in my mouth my mouth exploded marshmallows went everywhere!




here is the 1st Paragraph a of The Secret Locket!
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My Goal is: Organising Ideas





"The Gralems are coming!, the Gralems are coming!" Taylor screamed. "Keep calm Taylor. Just relax. The Gralems are just awful humans. You have an advantage because your a fairy!" The sweet soothing voice of Kayla reassured Taylor. "I guess so. You always know what to say Kayla."



Kayla smiled. "Let's hide in the Myst Tree!" Taylor's gorgeous blue wings shone in the sunlight. Kayla's orange sparkled wings shimmered like a star. The two friends rushed to the Myst Tree. On the tree was a round shaped door with a sign. The sign said 'MYST TREE...FAIRY ACCESS ONLY!' Taylor and Kayla flew inside and saw other fairies around.

here is a short as Version of The Puppy that Pooed and Peed on the Carpet.
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The Puppy that Pooped and Peed on the Carpet.

Goal: Organising Ideas

There was once a puppy, he was so naughty, he was as naughty as a cheeky monkey who eats your ice cream. Guess what he does… HE PEES AND POOPS ON THE CARPET!!!!  
Oh and by the way he has a doggy door and it is always unlocked as well as a doggy litter tray. He is a little spoilt brat because he has everything that a puppy would ever want.  He is so spoilt he even does it when someone is watching and looks back at them and grins.

His owners felt so annoyed as they had to keep cleaning up after him. He also rips up the carpet in the house, he chews the owners shoes, he barks at them when he doesn’t get his way and he wakes them up at 1am every morning because he is hungry.



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